All Comments on 'April Showers'

To slow

This was a trainwreck.

There were some minor errors of spelling/grammar but all in all, I loved it. I'm hoping there will be more to this story and NOT waiting until next April Fool's Day.

Very well done and a very erotic scenario. A very rare 5.

I liked it. Just enough twists and turns to make it interesting.

I only could understand this story if a category 5 hurricane was approaching them and they doubt they could survive it...1*

Kind of like a failed light switch not being a problem, for a person who is blind.

Until their eye sight is restored.

Its easy to endure a weak marriage, until you figure out what a real marriage relationship feels like. Ally and Sammy already have a better relationship with each other than either has with their spouse. I suspect when the day comes that Ally allows Sammy to cum in her pregnant body, it won't be the first time, and it won't be Darren's child. Hopefully by then they will be fucking their real life partner.

Interesting characters. Dreadful marriages.

He was definitely bigger than Darren. How could it be otherwise?

hey, his wife is cheating or so he thinks and he is ok with it? she gives him a

green light to cheat he thinks. would not be ok with me. he and his work wife

should get the new jobs and make a life for themselves.

They all had fun and at least he is neither feeling guilty or angry. He and Milena should really look around for a swinger club.

"April whore"! But it would have been still a turd!

Compelling read. Didnt care for Sam's take on his cheating wife, his easy acceptance of her playing away. This took away from his masculinity for me, but his hipster characterization provides the necessary cover. Interested to see where you take this, solid start.

Really good story. The anon comment bout an editor. Why? Decent build up. Interesting characters. Sex scenes were hilarious! I'm way past fucking in a car but I agree an SUV is much better for it! 4 well earned stars.

DragonRider55

....But clearly no heartbreak for this group of cheaters....

Hey, each to his/her own lifestyle, but it doesn't seem to me that Sam is really on board with his wife's "I only cheat out of town on trips" mindset. In spite of saying his marriage is secure and he still loves her.

Oh well....

Small details of ignorance annoy me. If you are going to use something like an illnesss or allergy in a story learn the basics otherwise don’t include it. It just shows your ignorance about life.

Dreadful marriage indeed.

If you are normal, you'll never in any way let another man/woman touching what yours.

Recommended to get some help, as go to psychiatrist.

Cute story, enjoyed this read. Thanks for your writing.