by Feare909
An editor could help you make this story brilliant.
It's romantic and sexy and I love mermaids! Unfortunately, the many errors detract from the pleasure of reading this story.
I like this story. I like the femme side of them. So cute and love the nicknames they have for each other.
Loved the way they made love and hot raw lovers , felt like I was watching and certainly got my erection attention it deserved.