All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 01'

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SilverSilhouetteSilverSilhouettealmost 10 years ago

Just 1 word....

More! *.*

theinternetisforporntheinternetisforpornover 9 years ago
Great story, shame about about the writing

An editor could help you make this story brilliant.

It's romantic and sexy and I love mermaids! Unfortunately, the many errors detract from the pleasure of reading this story.

gayswallowergayswalloweralmost 8 years ago
Great

I like this story. I like the femme side of them. So cute and love the nicknames they have for each other.

mikeuncutmikeuncutalmost 3 years ago

Loved the way they made love and hot raw lovers , felt like I was watching and certainly got my erection attention it deserved.

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