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DarkCynder64DarkCynder64about 7 years ago
So emotional

I love the story so far! I'm already in love with Merdam! I also love Adam's two roommates and their relationship with one another. Especially with Adam and Jamal. They seem like brothers. Oh and I thought Adam's eyes were brown and not green?

Feare909Feare909about 7 years agoAuthor
Re: So emotional

Yeah, I ORIGINALLY was going to have Adam have green eyes, but the more I pictured him, the more he had brown eyes, and it just felt more natural. I seriously need to revise the early chapters BIG time.

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