All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 21'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I'm crying

This story is so good it has me crying my eyes out. Hopefully the mermaid which I believe is Merricks sister will overcome her fear of humans to help Adam save Merrick. To betray laws that have been ingrained into you your whole life and suddenly forget them must be difficult for a young mermaid.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep posting! I'm completely and utterly in love with this unique and heartwarming story that I wish it would never end.

-P

DarkCynder64DarkCynder64about 7 years ago
Typical...

Figures... after all this time Merrick finally tells Adam about the eclipse and all it took was him on his death bed.

Feare909Feare909about 7 years agoAuthor
Re: Typical...

Well, as much pressure as he was, and the precious little time he had with Adam, the question never came up. Last moments he has, and he just wants to talk about something that make him happy...

If I sound defensive, I'm not trying to be, I swear 0~0

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