All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 22'

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DarkCynder64DarkCynder64about 7 years ago
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The mysterious woman must be Umieto. She truly is mysterious... like who would think she knew so much about humans unlike the others. And Atarah... I have this feeling she's more than human. Awesome Chapter as always! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

They say not to, "judge a book by it's cover," but I thought this story didn't sound very interesting. I was completely wrong, so far it has been one of the best stories I have read on this site. I think the mysterious woman is Merrick's mother. Can't wait to find out what becomes of the two lovers? And also what happened to Merrick's pod? Excellent story, there are some editing errors but they are minor and really do not affect the story.

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