All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 38'

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canndcanndover 9 years ago

oK, SO Erin has a reason to get help now. So, why hasn't she broken? Why hasn't she decided to stop this? Will she wait till thy torture adam? she needs to do something! Ad what about Daniel and his bf? can they keep this up too? erin should have just helped the guy out by choking him while he had his coughing fit :) maybe pressing on his painful face woulda kept him coughing till he died ...aghhh i'm a lol serioulsy this is getting out of control. I hope they can stop nigel. I hope merrick can be saved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Cowards!

Its painfully obvious that Merrick has no chance of escaping.

Thay have Adam!!

And Erin is softer than a marshmellow.

Please give us a happy ending and prove me wrong.

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baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Holy shit

That's all I have to sAy...

NicoRiley30NicoRiley30about 9 years ago
39?

so i read all 38 chptr's over the cousre of a week, and the way 38 ended i cant wait for the next one. I idenify sooo much with merrick. keep em coming pls thanx

Feare909Feare909about 9 years agoAuthor
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