All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 54'

This chapter made me cry. I'm so happy to see the pair of them together again.

However, you seriously need an editor: you constantly switch from present to past tense. If you want me to go in and change that to all past or all present, just hit me up at katiriablossom@hotmail.com or leannidewinters on Skype. I'd love to help an amazing story be even better.

wow so glad you decided to bring them back together. And so glad that they didn't finish what they started with the other guys

I'm so glad we finally got over that hurdle. I am not into the music of the last 30 years, but it seems the song Adam sang was just the right medicine to break through Merrick's hard as steel shell. Is that part of a real song?

Adam and Merrick have come to life for me. They are both so tender hearted, and so in love with each other, that when they hurt, I cry. Is this the end, or is there more to come?

Oh, it's a real song. It's sung by a fictional character by the name of Damien Dawn. I'll send you an email with the song on it so you can hear it - as I mentioned in this chapter, Adam changed the lyrics at the end of the song to make it more touching.

And this is not the end - there is still some more to come.

That's one of my favorite songs! I'm so glad Merrick turned around. I'm literally in tears!