All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 61'

Your story was so fabulous it did not need that extra porn crap in it. Very disappointing.

M. Karen

This is also a homoerotic story as well as a fantasy novel. What's a sexy fiction without a taste of sex appeal now and again?

But "Very Disappointing"? Is one porn session really such a let down at this point? As in, you 'expect better of me' than that? Look, just because I put in a sex scene in my own story, it's no reason to say it's not good anymore - that may not be what you're saying, but that's how it's coming off.

Fuck, now I'm getting defensive. Whatever, just never mind.

I should know better than to comment. I was disappointed that it wasn't main character sex. Your story has been so enthralling, that I don't want extra fluff, I just want to read about the boys, their lives etc. I am sorry I hurt your feelings. M. Karen

At the same time though, I get sexy scenarios in my head, and yet I can't really apply them here and there between any of the main characters at least at this time, and I don't like to work or create other stories while in the mix with one such as Aquata Cove. Besides, it's been a few chapters since the last tasteful sex scene, so a porno session for Adam seemed like a decent idea to combine the two notions.

Keep up the writing! So happy to have found ur story so many years ago! :-)

PS: Your story is perfect any way you decide to write it, so don't be sorry for defending yourself.