All Comments on 'Aquata Cove: Epilogue 02'

Wow. I’ve read every single chapter of this through out the years and have loved every single one of them. It’s sad to say this is finally at an end. I hope you will make another story soon. Loved your work

No new stuff for the time being, but I am rewriting and editing each chapter one by one and making them better :3

I think it would be cool if Jason met and connected with a young mermaid, and Naomi met a young land boy out in the sea swimming or diving. I know I would have liked to have encountered a mermaid in my younger days, all sorts of possibilities with such a scenario...just think: a girl who can eat underwater and stay down for hours!

I love the addition of their children..great to read how everyone's lives have changed over the years! Thanks for this!

I have spent the last week or so devouring this story from start to finish. To those that say it went on too long, I say no one is forcing you to keep reading! Reading it was like watching an old school nighttime soap opera full of drama, passion and humor. I laughed, I cried, I stayed up too late because I wanted to read more. Well done.

p.s. this is the first time I have felt compelled to comment on any story

I’m honored that even now I still get much coveted praise from readers. Though to be honest, I get a little embarrassed because that meant my story was read when my style was still amateurish. I’d start replacing each chapter with a revised version if it wasn’t so much trouble to do it on this site, AND the notion that I want to try and have AC published one day so putting in the edits online would be kind of unwise

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This story should be made into a movie, but then Hollywood would probably just screw it up. You say your writing is "amateurish," and that may well be, but the story itself was very well thought out despite that. The mistakes were easily over looked because the story was so good. I was both sorry and happy to come to the end. Great story, keep it up.