by Pelaam
A very accomplished piece of writing. Really enjoyed the story, eroticism and stimulation. Will definitely read more of your work
Thanks
It is simply ridiculous how good your writing is! I love all your stories and this is no exception. The erotic imagery is created perfectly. Thank you for your brilliant writing!!
Story was very sweet, romantic and hot. Your writing was exquiste and captivating.I can not wait to read more of your writings.
Afzal. We need to hear more of him and Rabi. Afzal should sneek Nadra on the ship. She would make a good cabin girl.
I love your writing, I could have been with them it was so vivid.
Beautifully crafted and perfect as always, Pelaam. You are by far my favorite writer here!
Wonderful! It brings the sea and the desert together in a thrilling tale. You write the most beautiful stories. Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading them. A few more than once.
I simply love your stories. And I see you love the combination of a blonde and a black head. Lol. I love how much romance it has. That it has a background and it doesn't go directly to sex. I love your stories. Keep it up. XD
Loved it! Couldn't stop reading it! I especially loved the tenderness and the love shown by the older brother for the younger. And the love scenes between Fahim and Bahadur were amazing! I believed every word.