All Comments on 'Arabian Knights'

by Pelaam

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great

A very accomplished piece of writing. Really enjoyed the story, eroticism and stimulation. Will definitely read more of your work

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Too good.

It is simply ridiculous how good your writing is! I love all your stories and this is no exception. The erotic imagery is created perfectly. Thank you for your brilliant writing!!

dioniciadioniciaabout 15 years ago
Loved, Loved, Loved It !

Story was very sweet, romantic and hot. Your writing was exquiste and captivating.I can not wait to read more of your writings.

sugarfairy1137sugarfairy1137about 15 years ago
More

Afzal. We need to hear more of him and Rabi. Afzal should sneek Nadra on the ship. She would make a good cabin girl.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good story

I love your writing, I could have been with them it was so vivid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Perfect!

Beautifully crafted and perfect as always, Pelaam. You are by far my favorite writer here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

A smashing tale with nice dramatic tension.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Arabian Knights

Wonderful! It brings the sea and the desert together in a thrilling tale. You write the most beautiful stories. Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading them. A few more than once.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow

I simply love your stories. And I see you love the combination of a blonde and a black head. Lol. I love how much romance it has. That it has a background and it doesn't go directly to sex. I love your stories. Keep it up. XD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Enjoyed

Please write more about these two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
please more

please right more coz i think they're very cute and sweet!:))

ChicosTodosChicosTodosabout 10 years ago

Wonderful writing! Thanks so much for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more

More plz it was beautiful but sad

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow!

Loved it! Couldn't stop reading it! I especially loved the tenderness and the love shown by the older brother for the younger. And the love scenes between Fahim and Bahadur were amazing! I believed every word.

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