All Comments on 'Araceli's Deal'
by maddiebarry
- 17 Comments
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoDespite being on the lower end of the reluctance spectrum, I really
Enjoyed this and found it ultra hot. I would love to read on and find out what happens next. I imagine some kind of wonderful
BDSM story. Please tell us you'll write more of this? I need to know who he is and what more sexy stuff he can do!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoVery well written, and I would love some more about/from this couple. 5* for an awesome beginning, to what I hope, is an equally awesome series!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThey just had really good chemistry even though Sir's name was never revealed.
It looks like it was intended to be a one-shot, but I personally would love to see a continuation to their story.
maddiebarryalmost 8 years agoAuthorThis is actually the first chapter of a prequel to The Island series (see some of my other stories), where we first meet Sir and see how he kind of got started on this path, long before he opened The Island.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI liked the story, of course. I've liked others as much but never rated anything as high as five stars before. That's for the quality of the writing, I'll read the rest of your work because of that.
TheIrishTuxalmost 8 years agoPerfect pacing, great buildup, almost no grammar/typos...rarely do I find a story on lit that I've enjoyed so thoroughly. Kudos, congratulations, and keep it up!
maddictover 7 years agoBecause you don't want me to and I do. Very exciting, I can't explain the need of her surrendering to my desire. You on the other hand have written a very ..... stimulating account of a mutual fantasy.
This is the introduction to your next story how fun, what will Celi discover about herself, and can I negotiate her away from my check book.
Sir Gray to my consort.
Auden Jamesover 7 years agoThe "private plane," placed curiously enough near the end of the short coda, wrapped it all up perfectly!
The narrative time used on the coitus though may have been a little too short; giving rise to the impression of a rather unexceptional quickie with rather exceptional results. Anyway, kudos for illuminating the—in PC-plagued times like these—inconvenient truth about the nature of female sexuality without veiling it in glossier and more convenient nonsense like "kindess," "affection" or "love."
–AJ
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI was hoping for the 15, 20 minutes of very, very good vaginal sex but had to make do with a paragraph. I like a lot of your stories, I wish my sex life was anything like these! (money not included..!)
maddiebarryabout 6 years agoAuthorThis is the first chapter of a novel called "The Island", which you can find at your favorite ebook retailer. It's the prequel to a 3-book series. So if you liked it, there's more to be had! Click through to my profile for links.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThis is so hot - wow! Definitely good way to get us to click fast on your sequel!
Anonymousover 2 years agonice
but why is it in non con.it was completeley consensual she agreed to it he is one of the best and gentle dom till now
the only thing i find repulsive was celi herself she is too irritating considering she is almost a naive virgin but still she is annoying a lot
she knows how to guve deepthroat but has zero knowlege about anal play or not even butt plug she is a graduate after all i am sure she has friends why does dhe behave like a virgin high schooler
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