All Comments on 'Archeologist in Heat Ch. 03'

thanks for a well rounded story, i will keep an eye open for further submissions from you. There are a few errors in syntax and tense continuity, may i suggest trying the services of one of the volunteer editors from the program on this site.. i use hotti , she's made my tales much more readable..most of all though, thanks again for bringing pleasure and... more, more, more

I love it .. you did a great job with this story .. different and good.. hope you'll write more and soon..

What a beautiful and inspired story, I loved it! Your writing is very good, too. Any mistakes -which I didn`t really notice- were minor. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your stories in the future.

The only minor quibble I had was the time-line. Having the female character conceived in 1986 (which was when Chernobyl happened) sets this quite a bit into to the future, around 2022 for the first story. Unless you intended it to be a futuristic werewolf story?

Pouncingtigress is right about the timeline not making sense in chapter 2. Chernobyl was only 22 years ago, why did I think it was more like 50? Sorry about that and thanks for pointing it out. I'll have to change it on my original, but its too late to change it here. Maybe I should use an editor for my future stories. Thanks again!

(The author)

This was a really interesting and good read. Will you be submitting anymore for reading?

such a great story!

she is his great great granddaughter or some shit like that!

Thank you so much for such a great tale. I absolutely loved it. Now I need to read more of your imaginations. KUDOS BIG TIME !!