All Comments on 'Archived Memories'

And very realistic

Nicely done - and oh so very British - terminology and spelling. Enjoyed every moment!

Love it, what a great twist; a younger more experienced lover. Thanks for a great read.

The usual fiction designed to arouse, but the story was too obvious and was hardly arousing. Skip the details on the blowjob. Should have concentrated on pleasing the woman. The anal was a joke. You've been watching too much porn.

My, you have written an outstanding short tory! Congratulations on a job well done. Your command of the language and writing skills are excellent, with a skillful demonstration of grammar, punctuation and spelling. This story had a unique plot twist which complemented the character development. All in all, quite a good read it is. Please do continue.

good for both them...!

Tho booty pirating, ESPECIALLY first time, should never be so quick...very slow and easy...tho there wasn't much time before her wedding...

Sexy storyline I can believe it could happen like that. Thanks for sharing.

After reading this I do want to tell you that not only did our affair last for oh golly many years no, but this past Spring our daughter graduated from college...and she too is pregnant by one of her married professors with whom her mother and I know very well.

Nicely done, wish it were the start of a longer saga.