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by KalDarov

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great!

Looks like your words need a bit of edditing though. I am sure that these new worls will be fun and I enjoy your writing. Sex scenes arent forced like some of the other content I read, but rather flows the story pretty nice.

CockyTrumpetCockyTrumpetover 6 years ago
The Best!

You love your works, and I can tell when a writer does his job at making people feel like a part of a world.

hellinahelmethellinahelmetabout 6 years ago

Definitely well done, will look forward to your next installment on this tale...Thank you for your time and effort to produce this for our enjoyment...thank you again.

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