All Comments on 'Are We Human?'

Unusual scene. I was expecting a vampire, but Abby was close. Drew was pathetic.

Well written, even though unbelievable that anybody would not know their worth

Wow. Incredible story!! Very well written. You are a nice writer man.

One question: where do you find any girl like abby?? I would fall in love for a girl like her, just in about two seconds. So perfect.

I hope you continue on this story, or at least keep going writting in another femdom stories.

Congratulations man ;)

Great story overall. I think the transition from a arogant male to subservient slave/slut was a little quick and could use some embellishment on his mental conflict,... could have been a little slower. With the exception of that, I loved it!

awesome

The minute she releases his throat? He slugged her. And then he slugged her again, knocking her out. When she woke up, he was gone. He's a man stupid. She tries to manhandle him, he kicks the crap out of her. Badly done drivel.

Your writing style is marvelous. Rated it five stars. However, the transition of Drew occurred way too quick, and entirely unnatural. I hope you will do it better in your future writings.

Interesting premise.

Extended domination without anything for him. OK. Not bad.

You need an editor. You wrote: "He CRAINED his head...". Nope. You meant CRANED.

Three stars.

Good premise.

Well planned out. But sure could have used some teasing of his cock by her even though he wasn't going to get to cum.

Four stars.