by CAP811
SO nicely conceived and developed, then he discovers scruples at the crucial moment? Lewis should have proceded with her defloration. Then the family would have no choice but to let them marry! How else could they cover the disgrace? I suppose in the next episode Lewis will attain his goal, but it will lack the delicious spice of illicit pleasure. Ah, well, one cannot have everything.
As a Victorian romance, I feel you wrote it perfectly
Well aren't you something Author nor can you be that old - well perhaps just experienced or a history buff.<P>
More than quite well written - this snippet was arousing and educating and entertaining. How did they ever procreate with all that 27 layers of clothing while talking in long sentences?<P>
Very Nice Work Author<P>
With Very High Regard
I have no problem with the wham-bam genre at which the Literotica site excels, or should I say overwhelms? But every so often it's delightfully refreshing to read something like this imaginative little story. Not sexy, perhaps, but romantic, lightly erotic, with the flavor of anticipating something delicious just about to happen. And, by the way, you've done your homework on period manners, dress, and furnishings, too. All in all, a story to be appreciated and savored by those who can. Thanks!
i love the pacing and attention to detail that the earlier time period allows for so nicely. it seems almost sad to me that i rarely read stories where the characters pay so much attention to each other's bodies. this was very nicely done. thanks! :)
is a tough genre to write. I loved your Irish maid story. I cried from that one as well as this one. It takes a master to capture the nuances of telling a story about loving someone.
tale. Told at a pace that drew me deeper and deeper with each sentance. This story is certainly worthy of publication in one of today's mainstream magazines, or perhaps even an erotic anthology.
I will certainly read more of your work and scored this a 5.
regards, Paris Waterman
How many ways can "five" be expressed?
5,5,5,5,5,5
Fantastic!
de Jay