by FourAndOne
It's a great little story. The descriptions were detailed but not dry, the setting is arousing, and I especially liked the subtle bit of almost non-consent at the end.
I'd personally like to third the request for a continuation with the rest of that day. On one hand because I think it ended a bit abruptly right before the good part, and on the other because I'd actually be interested in what exactly the heroines' relationship could be after that.
At any rate, very good work, anxiously awaiting more.
4 years on, and this is still in my top three. Please continue it! I'm sure Naomi has some other tricks up her business suit...
That's so cruel of you to torment me as a reader.
What a delightfully wicked thing to do to me, oh and Jenna
This is in my top ten of machine erotica, but it's not just because of the inventiveness of the chair. I think a lot of work is done by the small interaction between the two characters. I would be very interested in an exploration of their relationship after this event, as I'm sure others would be as well. Basically, you absolutely need to get back to this at some point, it's great.