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by EmoxRainbows

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good but...

the 2 points of view was not a good read. if you'd split it into two chapters it would have flowed much better.

man to be fucked and then led back out to the bar; not the happy ending I was expecting. i would have much rather "Jerry" and Adam getting/staying together.

also how do you accidentally sleep with someone? did he accidentally slip and fall on the dick? mistakes are one things acccidents like that...

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