All Comments on 'Arguments and Alterations Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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The men should've gagged on their girlfriends penises and been forced to swallow cum. The men ducking, wiping up the cum with a towel instead of swallowing or being drenched in semen isn't a fun game now is it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Chapter 2?

I can't wait to see what happens next. Please let there be another chapter.

Ragnarok385Ragnarok385over 8 years agoAuthor

Not only is there a chapter 2 waiting with the moderators there may also be a chapter 3 waiting with them as well ;)

BecqBecqover 8 years ago
That was...

Fun. Awesome, extremely well-written, and very fun to read. I am very excited for the next chapter!

Ragnarok385Ragnarok385over 8 years agoAuthor

Thanks! I am really happy you enjoyed the story and I'm glad you thought it was fun and well written. Those two things are the main things I hope to put into every story I write.

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