All Comments on 'Ariadne Ch. 02'

These chapters are to short.They don't contain enough story to make someone want to know more.At this pase we will get bore and move on or you will stop abruptly to submit chapters and never finish like so many others.

Please try to submit 2-3 chapters at once, to keep interest alive.

Interesting story. Plot flows well and quickly. Hope you continue it.

I love thissss so much please post again soon!

Well written! I like the slow build up of the story but the chapters are a bit short. Wouldn't hurt if they were longer or a bit more frequent. Regardless I'll defintely keep reading if you keep writing (:

When is the next chapter coming