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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Well Done

This is a well written story. Being a submissive myself I related to the sub in this story. The feelings and thoughts were captured very well.

Well Done and hope to see more like this from the author.

HughJardHughJardover 19 years ago
beautifully captures the emotions...

beautifully captures the emotional conflicts of a slave learning to be as her master wishes. very well done. thank you.

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