All Comments on 'Arii's Travels Ch. 06'

Great job wrapping up this story. It?s hard enough finishing your own but to complete a story by another takes talent! I especially like the last part. It was a nice touch and brought more to the story.

I read the first chapter when it was first written. I'm glad that someone finished the story, and I believe that you perhaps did a better job than the original author would have. It had good potential, and you helped develop it.

This was fantastic. Most erotic stories are either senseless fuckings or drawn out lulls with sex scenes sparsed. This kept me riveted, and I do admit to touching myself at every scene. The fantasy element is hardly there; it could probably have happened. Even still, it fits into any general fantasy world. The deeper meaning behind each chapter was felt throughout, and the final passage summed it up beyond any normal ending. Well done!