All Comments on 'Ari's Morning Swim'

by Redxoxo

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
interesting 1st story

suggest a sequel with penetrating, bareback, come inside vaginal + anal sex.

PoorwriterPoorwriteralmost 8 years ago
Very fun story!

Well written tease. Raunchy sex is so much easier to write and so predictable. You did the tease so well. I hope you will write more like that. You kept my interest throughout the entire story. Please don't cave in to the raunchy stuff. Perfect your exciting, teasing style.

DashDotDashDotalmost 8 years ago
Very erotic.

That was a sexy read, had me getting the tingles thinking back to my own brushes with getting caught and being thrilled.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sexuality and suspense and respect

I love all tbat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Omgggg!!!!!

This was SO sexy!!! PLEEEASE make not just one more, but several!! I LOVE how sexy you made him and how he teases her! It's SO hot!!!

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