All Comments on 'Arkansas: The Story of Kelly'

Articulate and sexy as all hell! Thank you.

I've been reading Literotica for years and have never been so amazed, enthralled, and mentally erotically stimulated as by this short story.

The details, artistic license, well developed writing style, and erotic adventure truly come together as a work of art. I'll be reading all your stories from now on.

Diego

nuff said....

thumbs up for this one ^_^

LB

I was actually a bit less than optimistic that readers would find the less erotic beginning of the story to their taste. I stand corrected and encouraged. I have always thought that erotic literature should have merit beyond simple arousal of the primal urge. I share these experiences as a way to preserve the memories and relive the encounters. Knowing that others enjoy my writing is, simply, a bonus. I thank you all for reading and commenting. I hope I can meet your standards again in the future. Once again, I am amazed that this was the most popular of the stories I have submitted. It buoys my faith in humanity.

As a hitchhiker who loves erotic lit this rules, great detail

nice one!

It could have been really good up Until you came, then you came again, and then again, and again, that turned a hot, believable story into an unbelievable one! Shame.

I enjoyed this story and one other that you wrote.