All Comments on 'Arlo Ch. 01'

by Gweall

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willieonewillieoneover 9 years ago

More soon please!

avidreadravidreadrover 9 years ago
Welcome Back

Liked the beginning a lot. We all know what Arlo needs to do. I look forward to the rest of the story eagerly.

baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Another good start

To what will most likely be another of your wonderful stories!

I'm waiting eagerly for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
hoping Jack helps Arlo sooner than later

looking forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

That 4' 8" height for Arlo must be a mistake? That's the height of an 11 year old child, pre adult growth spurt.

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