All Comments on 'Arnold Augustus Cabot College'

liked it want to see more

It loses any kind of realism or authenticity when you choose this style of writing. It comes off less like a story you've experienced, and more like a fantasy that's being revealed as thoughts occur to you. And fantasies that are written like that aren't worth the time to read. If you possess any kind of writing skill, try composing something that doesn't read like the instructions from the "dungeon master" for a bunch of kids playing Dungeons and Dragons.

While I like the idea of this story, I also agree with the other commenter that this stream of conciousness style is difficult to master and detracts from the story.

Liked the writing style

You need a little help with "your" and "you're and "their" and "they're. There's also some simple spelling errors. I'll look forward to the next installment.

Way too much time spent on trivial descriptions. Sorry, but I didn't make it past the second screen.