by Lia Monde
your story has nothing to do with two girls haveing sex. I read it and all thr time I was wondering when you were going to get to the lesiban action. Your story has nothing at all to do with lesiban sex.
Great story but maybe it should be in Exhibitionist and Voyeur. It does work, though. I liked it. To the other reader: Get a grip.
this story reminded me of college. . . and it was so good that this is the first time i have been compelled to write a comment on a story . . . great job . . . i cant wait to see where this story goes next
...Now we move to part 2 where they ravish each other's pussies with their tongues! Hurry up!
Starts low key but builds with a rush to a sexy climax. Nice approach to move from a single daydreamer masturbating to a duet. The sense of uncertainty and discovery by Talina was handled well. Subtle and natural and erotic. Very well-written. Thanks for the great read. I'm going to check out your other stories.
Story keep building on its erotic appeal and sensuality. The author obviously knolws how to arouse and does it very, very well. en
Very sensuous. Would have liked the two women to join each other or perhaps been sitting together much closer but a very sexy story!. Perhaps for a future story two women in a cinema with more public around. Also, another fav. of mine is for a woman with or without her partner going to a sex show and then being invited as an amateur to join a female stripper on stage.