All Comments on 'Art Ch. 01'

Great progress in elevating the tension toward the climax. When does the teacher take part with both?

Just wanted to say that was a fantastic first chapter. Loved the detail of Miss Carter and what went into the artwork Tim was creating and everything else. Looking forward to more.

That was just fantastic. Thank you.

An original idea - at least for me - well told and with a really good build-up.

Off to Cpt 2 ...

This is not a 5 but an over the top ten star piece of erotic erotic writing.

No another chapter should be Tom returning to draw again but this time of a hot jock stud and of course all the rest as done with the English teacher.

This is truly a gifted author at creating characters and scene. Being gay i did not think I would get aroused but I was thrilled to hear the exhibition of Tom's cock so thrillingly put on display.

I would pay an enorous sum of money to see a film made of this scene. Starring attractive natural humans, would be the most erotic thing in history.

Please keep writing you do an amazing job.