All Comments on 'Art, The Story Ch. 01'

Although the story is derivative,and I cannot give full marks for that reason,it is well written and interesting enough to make me look forward to the next episode.

Great start keep writing, fun story

Nice start - it will be interesting to see where you take this. Pay attention to spelling a little more - there are a couple of words which are close to correct, but mean something else as spelled.

Great start, I'm very interested to see what happens next. Congrats on an engaging tale.

I like that you make the main character Arty an average person. I'm so tired of stories about what I consider to be extreme minorities (6 1/2 feet tall, 12 inch cocks, 12-pack abs, movie star handsome looks, etc. etc.). I feel you set up the story well and handled the lab accident well. I already care about Arty as a person and am interested in where you take this story from here. I am hoping that Arty does eventually return to his "regular average" self, although I wouldn't complain if reversing the effects of the accident left him with a least a larger cock to reward him for surviving his very stressful "adventure".