All Comments on 'Artiface of Strength Ch. 01'

This is really a fantastic start. These are some interesting characters! Can't wait to read more :-)

I'm intrigued and want more. Specifically about the plans Burton Waters has, and then about (Flo)rence and (Will)iam ;)

in that order? I don't know....

I'm assuming that this a werewolf clan. you might want to stoke "Mygypsy's" story "To love A Stray" on Wattpad. I hope this isn't like "Twilight" which is werewolves & vampires for 12 & under and is very insulting to us that are into the genre.Just to let you know that "To Love a Stray" is about a werecat colony in Australia. Your story is interesting so I'll see how it developes.

Interesting characters, good chemistry, detailed storyline, foreshadowing (I get the feeling Burton is more than human, or at least knows about supernaturals), great length.

Can't wait for more.

Sorry to be that person, but just so you know, it's "artifice" not "artiface."

Heh! That one slipped through. No editor and I have to revise a lot.

As long as I am here... This will run around 12 chapters when it is done. Thus far, I generally am about two chapters ahead of what is posted here. Also, there is a map of the Whiskey Lake region, but I've yet to figure out how to post it. Thanks for reading.