All Comments on 'Artiface of Strength Ch. 10'

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ariesgirlariesgirlover 8 years ago

They were behaving like a bunch of immature college kids in this chapter. I kind of figured someone was going to sneak up on them while they were too busy partying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I think this was my favorite chapter (though 4 was pretty good). They are obviously acting like college kids, that's the point isn't it? New, true love brings out the silly, naive, unprotected parts of us everytime!!

Edhawk64Edhawk64over 8 years ago
Loving this!

Really good chapter! Love the mate bonding and teamwork shown by Will and Florence. The Pack seems to be falling under their sway.

Question to be asked is if Will and Florence are the new Alphas what do you have planned for John and Beth? I'm sure there will be some casualties in the forthcoming battle, hopfully not too many of our favourite characters.

Keep up the good work, and thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.

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