All Comments on 'Artifact'

A great fantasy!!

I feel like you've never actually talked to a woman about what she likes about sex. It's incredibly clear a man wrote this, and my guess would be an inexperienced one. I would challenge you to actually have a conversation with the next woman you're with. I promise that the discussion, if not arousing for you, will be for her and you'll probably learn a few things on how not to just be better in bed, but also how better to get into the head of a woman wanting to be fucked and fucked right for your next foray into writing erotic literature.

Thanks for the complement Bob ! And thanks for the feedback Anonymous. Wrong on pretty much all counts, but I'm glad it's advice that you're following !

A beautiful orgy!

I’m not sure why men write cuck stories. Women, of which I am one, find it revolting to think a guy would like the idea of someone else fucking us. Any guy who would enjoy watching us used by another isn’t worthy of us. And far from it being erotic, it is grotesque.

And it’s poorly written to boot.