by whatspringdoes
A very good and well written. I enjoyed it hugely.
Do keep writing similar stories or at least in the same vein.
Mike
Thank you for your first story. It is well written. You made it easy to image being there. Unfortunately, this is not my type of interaction so it wasn't erotic to me.
Good writing. I hope you continue on with it. I'm not usually into face slapping but regardless I still found it very hot so you know you wrote a good story.
dude this was surprisingly good! i dontusually readall of it,just skip the intro but you had me hooked from the start *.* you better keep writing❤️