All Comments on 'As If I am Your Wife'

At times a little difficult to follow, but that is language.

A loving and tender story.

You need to be more Americanized.

Thumbs up to you mate very nice story and full of charm romance and have every ingredient to masterbate :D

I'm hooked to your writing and read your stories over and over again. If you feel you've had enough of writing such stories, you could write a how-to or share some of your thought process.

all ur stories are superb... they simply keep u engrossed.....

No!! Don;t stop writing!! i love your work!

you should keep part 2 ... how she became your wife and kept servicing as mom, lover and wife. Add some kinky situations. She is adorable and having a juicy cunt. Let explore little more. Knock her and suck milk.. 3rd part - become grand pa and grand ma. Still love like the beginning.

you are a very good writter

... that's why i have so many vivid memories of how i admired my mom and her body and her charms...

My sexual infatuation with my mom was total (=100%)!

In a way i was also in love with her...

I was a voyeur son, i was spying on her.

I once managed to see her naked in the bathroom as she was taking shower.

My parents entertained a lot. They had many friends, usually couples, just a few single men who were considerably younger than my dad. I noticed she flirted with some of them, now i realize she was hitting on them... she enjoyed using double entendre expressions. They readily showered her with compliments... and more than that.

You r awesome writer your all stories r so good please be more active and make more stories its request n be all mom n son

(1) I totally agree this is a "loving and tender story." That's the kind of stories i like.

(2) As regards Indian English, i know that the idiom differers from the American one. You were not at all disrespectful of Indian English.

This is a friendly advice: try to read it with an open mind & you will understand it well. EROTICA writers' task is to share there erotic fantasies with us. The moment the pause to think about indioms &/or choice of words they lose their train of thought. The additional problem is that erotic fantasies are anyway coming to mind faster than we can write them.

(3) Moreover, it is very difficult to convey the erotic aspect of a scene. The eroticism is immaterial: can't be touched, has no smell or taste. It is like a ghost who communicates with us thru the writer as a medium.The writer must tell the story from his heart directly in order to convey to us his thoughts & feelings unprocessed (raw) & in all their complexity.

(4) Erotic feelings can be expressed even in Broken English:

TODAY ME LUNCH CHINESE FOOD IN MALL. ONE EOMAN ENTERS CHINESE RESTAURANT, VERY SEXY. I LOOK I LIKE. SEXY. ME LIKE HER VERY MUCH. ME BREATHING DIFFERENT. BEART KNOCK KNOCK FAST. ME KNOW HER. NO. NO POSSIBLE. ME NEW IN TOWN. O MY GOD, ME REALIZE: SHE SAME SAME MY MOTHER WHEN ME YOUNG.

WHEN YOUNG, ME VERY CRUSH ON MOTHER.

THIS WOMAN TALL, MY MOTHER TALL

THIS WOMAN NO SLIM, HAS SHAPES, BIG ASS, BIG BOOBS, GREEN EYES, SEXY SKIN. MY MOTHER SAME SAME.

THAT MOMENT ME REMEMBER ME VERY MUCH CRUSH ON MOTHER.

ME REMEMBER MOTHER & I IN CABIN OF GRANDMA. PALMS OF MOM BURN STOVE IN KITCHEN. SHE SUN TAN. SHE BIKINI. SHE CALLS ME TO COME TO HER. SHE GIVE BOTTLE SUN TAN CREAM. SAYS PLEASE HELP, PUT ON MY BODY. ME FIRST PUTTING CREAM ON ARMS. THEN NECK. THAN BACK ABOVE BIKINI BOTTOM. ME LOOK MOM'S THIGHS. ME LOVE THIGHS. ME NO BOOB MAN. ME ASS MAN HALF HALF. ME THIGH MAN FOUR HALVES. ME START CREAM FROM FEET. GO UP UP. ME LOVE PART BACK OF KNEE, VERY VERY SOFT. ME HEART KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK. ME DIZZY. O MY GOD THIS NO HAPPENING THIS TOO GOOD. ME NO THIS LUCKY. FOR ME, ME MOTHER MISS WORLD. FOR ME WHEN GOD MAKING SRXY WOMEN HE MADE ONE DAME SAME ME MOTHER. ME START CREAM ONE THIGH, SECOND THIGH. ME FEEL NO BREATHING. ME HART NO KNOCK KNOCK. ME FEEL ME PISSIBLE CUM SOON. ME SAY TO ME: "ME MUST NO CUM. IF ME NO CUM NOW, ME NO CHEAT EXAMS. NEVER. ME STUDY HARD. IF ME NO CUM NOW ME NEVER STEAL GRANDMA CIGARETTES... iF ME NO CUM NOW ME GO WITH GRANDMA TO CHURCH ON SAINT JOHN THE BAPTIST DAY... ME MUST NOT CUM NOW!"

THE PHONE RINGS. MOM SAY SEE WHO CALL. NO FORGET COME BACK FINISH JOB PLEASE."

ME ANSWER PHONE, ME WRITE MESSAGE FOR MON, ME THINK DIFFERENT THINGS, ME DRINK DODA POP, ME BREATH NORMAL, ME NO SHOOT SPERM THAT DAY. ME PRAYERS HELP! ME FINISH CREAM THIGHS.

THAT DAY BEST DAY THAT SUMMER. ME NEVER FORGOT THAT DAY.

ME DID KEEP MENTAL PICTURE MOM BODY, MOM BIKINI, MOM THIGHS. THAT PICTURE VERY SHARP.

THAT MEMORY MY JACK OFF FANTASY NEXT 12 MONTH.

ME HOTS GOR MOTHER VERY STRONG NEXT 10 YEARS. ME KARMA TO HAVE OEDIPUS COMPLEX.

ME DID BRAKE 2 PROMICE: ME NEVER GONE CHURCH WITH GRANDMA (BECAUSE ME IDIOT); ME CHEAT EXAM AGAIN (BECAUSE ME LAZY).

Please write more stories, I love all your narrations which are all mostly matched with real times. No one's narrations are as good as yours. All your fans will be very happy if you continue your writings.

***** (5)!

:-)

cudnt take my eyes from reading it without missing a sentence. keep it up

Shiraj Bhai, very great story and really written with great passion. Appreciate all your efforts. but why are you stopping to write further.You are one of the flag bearer from sub continent. please posting

I am also very deep fan of your narrations, which are mostly touching the real time scenarios, Along with me all your fans will be really very happy if you continue you mother son, stories. We will miss your narrations if you don't continue your, Anyhow thanks for all your so far stories....

:)

of saying it without ' saying it '.

ergo the obvious score

full marks! *****

❤

:)

Thank you for this mom-son incest story!

❤️❤️❤️❤️!! ‌♪♪♪♪♪

English is clearly not your first language

I am very much into mom-son incest stories. In my book they are very erotic owing to the taboo component.

I LOVE this story, it is very erotic and totally realistic.

I gave you a 5 (☆☆☆☆☆)!

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Anonymous - about 5 years ago

I have read somewhere from a reliable source that we tend to have vivid memories of events which triggered a tempest of strong emotions ... that's why i have so many vivid memories of how i admired my mom and her body and her charms...

My sexual infatuation with my mom was total (=100%)!

In a way i was also in love with her...

I was a voyeur son, i was spying on her.

I once managed to see her naked in the bathroom as she was taking shower.

My parents entertained a lot. They had many friends, usually couples, just a few single men who were considerably younger than my dad. I noticed she flirted with some of them, now i realize she was hitting on them... she enjoyed using double entendre expressions. They readily showered her with compliments... and more than that.

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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5), ❤❤!

I LOVE this story, gave it

a 5.0 = 100% (★★★★★).

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥) 👍👍!

In my book this is an EXCELLENT mom-son erotic story.

☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

Bravo! Bravissimo!

I LOVED this story. It is intensely erotic without being pornographic! It also is romantic and poetic!

☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0)!

I LOVED this mom/son erotic story.

5.0 = 💯% (💜💙💚💛❤) 👍👍!

This is an EXCELLENT story:

5.0 (💜💙💚💛❤),👍👍!

Excellent, 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 (5.0)!

Excellent, ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ (5.0)!

❤ ❤ !

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Anonymous, about 5 years ago

Best story i ever read

Thumbs up to you mate very nice story and full of charm romance and have every ingredient to masturbate :D

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My kind of mom sex story.

You hit the nail on the head with this story.

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... Meena seeing him sweating and panting silently slipped out of his grasp and walked down to her room feeling totally satisfied.

Next morning as Rajesh left for site Meena was worried as to how she would face him on his return. She started contemplating on many plans and finally decided that she would ask him to take her on a long drive as by the time they returned it would be very late and he would go to bed directly as he would be tired...

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I LOVED this story!

☆☆☆☆☆ (five.)

☆☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0)

An excellenf story: ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ (5)!

This is a very popular story.

Rating (mark): 4.32 stars

[which is 86.4% (= A)].

109 faves & 133.3 views:

109 ÷ 133.3k = 0.82 faves per 1k views,

an exceptionally good faves-to-views ratio.

☆☆☆☆☆+ (5.0)!

Loved it.

A sex story and a love story, two in one.

Loved it: ☆☆☆☆☆ (5)!

I totally loved this story, gave u a 5.0 = 100%!

Excellent, 5 stars. Loved it.

This is a sex story & a love story, two in one!

It is erotic & romantic. In my book it is also poetic.

My kind of mother-son incest story!

This is a FIVE STAR STORY.

5*****

I loved this story.

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐- [5- (4.65 = 93% = A+)]!

EXCELLENT!

EXCELLENT!

EXCELLENT!

I really really LOVE it!

This is one of the best Indian mother Incest-Taboo stories.

In my book this is one of the best Indian mom-&-son incest stories on Literotica!

I am copy pasting anon comment that I liked.

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Anonymous - almost 6 years ago

I am great fan of all your stories

Please write more stories, I love all your narrations which are all mostly matched with real times. No one's narrations are as good as yours. All your fans will be very happy if you continue your writings.

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My kind of mom-&-son incest story.

This is a five star story (5.0 = 100%)!

You are an excellent incest/taboo story teller.

Please write a story of a horny son obsessed with mothers ass, how gets her love and fuck her and fuck her ass