All Comments on 'As Soon As I Wake Up Ch. 02'

Hot stuff indeed. anxious for the next installment

Brings back fantasies of many a young lads.

i hope the next part of this great story is soon.

good job

her name went from Ariella to Mariella on page 2 of this chapter.. you want to fix that.

What can I say? Envious that my schooldays were nothing like this. The possibilities are endless. Can't wait for the next installment.

Make another one

This story went way too fast. Having 'realized' his power in Ch.1, he should have 'experimented' with it in tiny incremental steps without using it as a 'power'. His thoughts could have got the sexy teacher to undo a few buttons first. The frumpy teacher to dress "a little" more sexy. Then his thoughts could have directed frumpy to "show a little" by way of bending and spreading during class, and holding him back after class. Sexy could have simultaneously allowed him a little feel of her chest (without going too far). So on and si forth, the story could have progressed at a much better rate. In your last story, you commented it was more spur of the moment and you would give more thought to the next chapters. I'm afraid Ch.1 was way superior in my humble opinion.

I hope this one continues. It's quick and the action is extremely hot.

I look forward to reading about them taking Ms. Ariella home, then adding her sister into the mix and his cheerleader friend, Lori, as well. Maybe he has to temporarily return to the hospital for an overnight observation and manages to bag a nurse or two, or even a female doctor.

With a name like Meloday, shouldn't her twin have been named Harmonay? ;-)

Can only assume he is dreaming all of this. Thus the dizzy spells when nodding. Don't ask, it sounded good when I first thought it.

You skipped all the steps of exploration in the build up of a seduction. You never even explained how the teacher knew his mother. You dont go from 0 to 100 unless it is pay per view.

Sorry, but being a lazy writer loses points.

Regardless of whether you punk us or not with his all being a dream, i'd love to see an update to this or honestly most of your stories.

even if it is just a dream

A very good story. I like the characters, especially the mother and son. I hope you let them discover their closeness as they feed on each other. There is nothing like a mother and son love story. I saw this story was written awhile ago, but I hope you will consider to consider writing more. I like the flow and format you use. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Hope this continues. Great stories.

WHAT AH!!! KICK IN THE ASS FOR RICK, WHEN HE WAKES UP......NICE READ THANKS

So is it Ariella or Mariella?

Does it really matter one way or the other?

I read this story before but I think it was posted in mind control and there seemed to be some minor changes made to the story, in the other story the jock Fred also got payback for him being an asshole that he was. The girlfriend of the jock was more involved in the other story. This story was only a part. of the other story, .both stories are a good read.

I don't see how you could have read this story specifically before this. My stories are always posted in the Incest category. Also, when I use another author's work as inspiration, I always give credit to the original writer. I am sure there may be some similarities to other stories on the net but aren't there always?

As far as I know, though, these two chapters derived from my fevered mind.

Thanks for reaching out.

Great story!

Looking forward to Part 3

Awesome but where is ch 3 can't leave us hanging although it's been a while!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn you stopped writing this story