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I loved my small business—although I'd given up the idea of goats for the time being—and within a couple of years was building very well on the foundations established by Joe Brownlee. Sometimes, when we weren't working or sleeping or making love, Dot would take me into her little gym and show me the rudiments of boxing. Although unlikely that either of us would want to fight anyone, it was good exercise. Before long, what with that and my work, my body was as lean and fit as Dot's and I felt great on it.
We were so happy, and all in all we had twelve wonderful years together...
The story continues in Chapter 2
- COMMENTS
FranziskaSissyover 1 year agoNeber been travelling the british islands and so my judgements about country folks and gays are 0 ...... So the tale is showing a part of country living and the truly hopefully open mimded neighborhood ...... So this was a lovely romance, until the last sentence, this killed all the work ...... This sentence is so formfitting like a quader in a round hole ....... What i mean, its not connected to the story, just something thrown down the path
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Anonymousover 2 years agoI liked your story, well done and tastefully written and emotional. Keep up the good work.
GaiusPetroniusover 2 years agoYou are a master at conceiving and developing characters who engage the hearts and minds of your readers. I can't judge the accuracy of your portrayal of the Yorkshire accent and peculiar locutions, but if they're not genuine, you nevertheless have drawn me into a lovely fictional experience. You've succeeded at giving Fran and Dot each their own distinctive voice, just as most recently you did so masterfully with Roinin in Dark Rose.
This chapter could well stand on its own. But then you've thrown in the shadow of a dark cloud at the end.
Easily 5 stars. Thank you for sharing your talent.
