All Comments on 'As You Wish'

Loved it!

Love the story and the cast. It has warmed my heart. Thank you!

Only one thing: Goldman not Golding (Lord flies)

I feel like a twit! You're totally correct about the William Goldman vs William Golding comment and as much as Lord of the Flies is a classic (although one I dislike), really not the story or author I was crediting. *blushing like a fool*

Thanks for pointing that out, and I'm glad you liked my story.

The BEST story that I've read here. PLEASE write a second chapter!!! Please!!!!!

I sent you a private feedback. But I need to post a public one. This was a very good read. It was believable. The sex was part of the story and not "the" story. And you didn't rush getting to it.

I enjoyed the build-up until near the end. I'm not sure if this is a stand-alone story, or if you're planning on some follow-up chapters. I'll admit that the build-up was great, but I did feel that things were rushed once they acknowledged to one another that they felt a mutual attraction. the physical nature of their relationship just happened too quickly and Pippa seemed to change her behaviour a bit too easily. There is definitely a lot left to cover for additional chapters, so I hope you don't leave it at this. 4* from me.

The pace of it...the build up...the way you crafted this is sublime!

Pal, the guy who wrote The Princess Bride is William Goldman. Golding wrote Lord of the Flies, which is a great book but is definitely another kettle of fish!

and way too woe is me.

Thank you for this nice story, not only romance, but also a bit of redemption.

Thank you!

This was delightful. Such a lovely tale of romance. Thank you

Unfinished. A crime of the magnitude as perpetrated against Luke and Cassie deserves to be solved and to have Justice served. There was no mention of the three punks being apprehended, tried and convicted of Attempted Rape and Attempted Murder. Therefore, this story is incomplete.

This is a good one please finish the story.

Princess Bride is one of the greatest movies ever,,, and this story does it justice

Thanks...It's a heartwarming story.

Excellent, many thanks