All Comments on 'Ashes to Ash's Ch. 02'

Another beautiful chapter, emotional, sexual and so stimulating.

I tingled as I read each paragraph, well written with a great story line, where will it lead too?

Please don't stop writing, you are so talented, you know how to stimulate a girls mind.👄 The electricity you are creating in me is sure to cause an overload to my system.

I am hoping the combination of the high voltage ⚡⚡⚡ ,together with the "flood" I am experiencing doesn't cause me to explode. 🎆

Take it from me, there are not too many superfluous words in this story. It is a very well-written and heart-warming piece. You can write, so keep at it.

I truly hope that is not the end. 😢😱