All Comments on 'Ashlee's Weakness Ch. 02'

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hanna_ahanna_aover 13 years ago

I like the psychological description and probability of this series very much - apart from the very well and beautifully descripted sex scenes.

I cannot imagine how Ashlee could have done all these things in one single day - college, love Macy, meeting with Alex, masturbating, vacuumimg, dinner with Macy, watching porn, masturbating again, writing a paper, sleeping, loving Macy again .... but never mind, I didn't really calculate.

It is a pity (but of course nit the author's fault) that usually I forget much abaout the characters in the time between two chapters. Some of them I already read twice - which is quite an enjoyable idea ...

Very beautiful work! (And, btw, what was that about your links "in the profile"? I found nothing, sorry ...)

azzmoazzmoalmost 13 years ago
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I'm hoping that we will get to see what happens next. It's good drama.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

So very good!

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