All Comments on 'Ashleigh's Encore'

I didn't read all of it. I get turned-off from these stories that tries to put the reader in the story with "you". What's so hard about giving the neighbor a name?!? It ruins the fantasy/realism by trying to make me a participant in the story.

It's a story told first person, kinda like a POV porn video. Some writers make it work, some don't I thought this writer did a damn fine job. my hard cock does so anyway!