by kinkyashley07
Love this one that was a very hot story . Keep it up . You have a very good story going .
dutch513
Loving this story so much. It hits a lot of my buttons with older brother/younger sister and dom/sub as well. I look forward to reading more!
More please, loved how willing both brother and sister are.
Plus the way she obeys his wishes.
Beautifully written .
the story is good but, you are a little rough and feelingless for someone you are suppose to love dearly . I wouldn't have done it to her , she did do it you . I would ask her if she was all right with it first , you do what you want its your story
Very nice pacing and believable dialogue. It was an exciting read. I hope you continue this.
I want to know if you ever fucked him or is this all made up and not real.. Either way it was hot.