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All Comments on 'Ashley and Her Lust'

by lilamisakh

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hornyinwvhornyinwvabout 15 years ago
Pretty good

Good story line, love the stepfather/stepdaughter theme. One word of advice though-find an editor, he or she can help you make your story even better and much easier to read. Keep writing.

swakimmyswakimmyalmost 11 years ago
good story, crappy writing

Great story poorly written. Needs an editor very badly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Ashley is such a weak whore

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