All Comments on 'Ashley and Jack's Turkish Delight'

I want more!

This story was smokin' sexy. The descriptions really pulled you on, especially the emotional journey each character undertook. Bravo. Let's have a sequel of these characters meeting up again in Oxford or wherever, like a planned weekend getaway to Brighton. You painted such in depth, rich characters, and it'd be a pity to throw them away after only one story.

I loved this. Not only was the sex hot, but the character development drew me in. Liked all three of them as people. Especially loved that the threesome added to Jack and Ashley's relationship in a believable way. Would love a follow-up.

Falls just short of great for me, as there were some very distracting grammatical errors that took me several attempts to figure out. The material is great though, love the interplay between the characters. Looking forward to your next one!

and enjoyable 4*

Beautifully written. Hot and sexy. The threesome met the needs of all three people and I would love another chapter. 5+

You entranced me with character development. And I loved the description of a threesome that was fulfilling for all three. Beautifully written.

Honestly one of the best stories I've ever read don this site and I've read hundreds of them. Time to go read you brothers, I suppose.