All Comments on 'Ashley and Mia Ch. 02'

by CharlottePeach

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Naughty.....and nice.

LcnmdLcnmdover 8 years ago
Naughty...

But to fast...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Confused

Wait so brad walks in while they are having sex or what?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Did brad walk in on them? Or did they finish before he walked in?

CharlottePeachCharlottePeachover 8 years agoAuthor
Error when published

To everyone asking if Brad walked in on them, no he did not. When I submitted this chapter there was a clear page break between after them having sex and Brad coming back home to the apartment but the editor must have deleted it out. Sorry for the confusion

liz33ndliz33ndover 8 years ago

great story, but it needs far more seduction, wow, fast mover..

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