All Comments on 'Ashley and Mia Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
as always

a great story, I love the food idea keep up the great writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Don't get me wrong, i love the story but I miss the romance. Its just sex sex sex

Xo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good but...

Love the story overall but I'd like to see more character development, or something other than just sex. When they finally said their I love You's I thought "finally" something deeper. Ashley and Mia seem to really love each other but there needs to be more to their story than just a bunch of random sex scenes put together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I cannot wait for the next chapter. Hurry up, please :))

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