All Comments on 'Ashley Blows the Pizza Guy'

What a fun story, loved it 5!

This needs a six at least!

It's an excellent story with a very fun, light-hearted mood to it. And Ashley is terribly sweet and a great main character for the story. Sweet and slutty - my favourite kind of girl!

The only downside was how she felt at the end and I hope she soon sees it as Chelsea does and is OK.

If you're considering a sequel, some kind of revenge by Ashley on Chelsea and/or the others might be an idea? So long as its nothing dark and maintains the same fun, easy going style...

Perhaps she seduces and sucks off all their boyfriends? Just a thought!

Thanks for the great story!

My vote for a sequel as well. That was a really well written tale and I'd love to see what else these girls can get up to!

I've seen that movie and it's one of my favorites! Your story followed it perfectly! Thanks for writing it.

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