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Click here"Thanks. I had a lot of trouble sleeping last night. The only thing I could think about was how'd you react this morning." My sister cuddled up with my blanket. There were a few white spots on it, but she didn't seem to care nor notice. "I don't think I'll have any problems sleeping tonight."
From my chair, I watched Ashley close her eyes and enter a peaceful state of bliss. Not another sound came from my bed. I sat there for who knows how long before being overtaken by drowsiness. Turning off the computer monitor and lamp, I crawled beneath my blanket. Ashley was courteous enough to sleep on one of half of the mattress, but I didn't want to end the night with any space between us. Scooting closer to her until our faces lay inches apart, I faintly smelled my scent from her mouth.
The past twenty-four hours had been one hell of a ride and I wondered what the following day would bring me. Ashley has been--and always would be--a big part of my life. Till then, all I had were games and grades. I've had a crush on my sister since we were young teens and I thought my obsession would be nothing more than a what-if. Now that what-if has become a will-be. The possibilities were endless and I couldn't wait.
I soon joined Ashley in dreamland with a serene smile across my face.
Okay, I'm not even halfway through this and I'm loving it. If you don’t fuck it up somewhere in the last half of the story, then you're definitely going to get 5 stars out of me. The playful banter between Ashley and her brother feels very lifelike. Case in point, I totally lost it and went ROFLMAO over the following paragraph:
Ashley could barely contain herself. She kept laughing as she spoke. "No way. The things Nicole can do to me are way worse than this." I imagined Ashley strapped down in a Frankenstein-ish castle with a demented Nikky ready to flip a giant switch behind her.
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I absolutely NEVER stop reading in the middle of a story to make a POSITIVE comment. I've stopped many, many times and quit reading to make a negative comment before I walked away. That should be a sign for you. I'm returning back to your tale so that I can continue to enjoy your work. ❤ 🤍 💙 🧡
I almost stopped reading this first chapter about half way through because it seemed to be getting boring. And then the family dinner scene and the conversation just simply became "corny" in my opinion. I'm Not a writer and I don't mean to criticize but the conversation just didn't sound like what mature adults would say especially from a Dad. But then the anticipation/action between Ashley and Brian saved it. Erotic without being sleazy. And yeah, Brian's actions and words do seem to be a bit odd for someone who is 2 years older than Ashley. But as the author pointed out, he is shy and inexperienced. They are both learning from each other. Nothing wrong with that. They are in No hurry. I hope the rest of the series is up to par with this one. 5
Im on to the next chpter, this one was already a absolute prize winner. love the slow build up and the development of the characters.
Loved the story thus far. I couldn't stop until I had read it all!!!!!! Great job on the build-up and with the characters. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your stuff!!!!!! Again great job!!!!!!!!!!!!
I liked the story, I like stories with a build up like this. Something i didn't like though is that it seemed like the older brother was the younger of the two. I understand he is inexperienced and a virgin but, he has lived with and interacted with his sister for years. Yet he consistently stares at her and gets lost in thought, that gets frustrating.
First she wouldn't have just passed out on top of him so completely just from masturbating, there was no booze or drugs, she at best would be drowsy but still quit awake. Add in the fact of rolling her over. Plus it was so stupid that he wouldn't like her fingers........she just finger fucked his mouth and told him to taste her. I couldn't read past that, too unrealistic for me.
Yeah this was not boring, you build up the relationship so well. Your vivid descriptions of the characters and setting are not a bad thing. It makes the story more immersive. I don't want a story where I don't feel something for the protagonists (usually sometimes I DO give a fuck piece a good rating).
I though the story was fantastic! There's a million stories to JO to, but this was an incredible "day of my life" snapshot. I thought the characters were realistic and the storyline was intriguing. Those 2 page "I fucked my sister" stories are good for a quick JO but this was realistic and a damn site better than any of those. Keep it up! You are probably my favorite author!
This series are so boring, there is very little drama, no excitements, just long day by day life. Boring love story. Don't waste your time. There are not many good long build story on this site, but those good ones usually have bad ratings. And yet this shit long boring story have high ratings? stupid readers, fucking faggots
@auhunter
That really is incorrect. It should be if either one isn't happy, then no one is. If you let your wife or girlfriend run you around, then that's on you. My ex tried that, and it was mind numbingly horrible. My current wife and I haven't played those games, and it makes for a much better environment.
The only thing that irritates me more than a whipped man, is a woman that tries to control him by using sex. They both deserve what they get. I'd rather masturbate than deal with the drama and bullshit. If you enjoy being walked on a leash, then I guess that works for you.
Any man says he is the boss in his own house, will lie about other things.
He is not simple, look at all the action he is getting. If you would have said pussy whipped at least to some degree I would have agreed. Should I be so lucky