All Comments on 'Ashley's Awakening'

She is one lucky girl. Please keep writing this story so we can see how well of a slut slave she becomes.

My biggest issue, and turn off, with this story was that you continually use the wrong form of words. The main one being "Your/You're" - you tend to use the earlier, when the latter is actually required (You're a slut, You're soaking wet, etc, rather than Your). Other examples were Hear rather than Here...

Content was fine, but yeah, working on using the appropriate word form, or getting someone to spell check for you would be a great step up.

i love it

continue

I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this. I like the psychological aspect moreso than the physical, so writing about the mental changes she's going through (how she sees herself and her transformation, willing or otherwise) is definitely hot. Sure, I could see her getting "slut" tattooed on her ass, but reading her thoughts about the changes, the nipple rings and tattoos and gangbangs, is far more erotic, imo.

She says she wasn't to be used, but she really doesn't have any idea what that means. She's given up control to her master, but doesn't have any real-world understanding of what she's getting in to. What's she going to think when her master actually marks her as property? How's that going to change her mentally? Is there a point of no return?

Wow that was amazing, please continue.

Congratulations!!

And go on! ;)

love it, Ashley's gonna be great!

I see you're back with a new story, does that mean we might finally hear about the poker game?

loved it hope to see more soon