All Comments on 'Ashley's Bitch'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

5* entirely for him coming to his senses and telling her 'enough.' Not every story needs be the character bottoming out on the rabbit's hole.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

There was a time in beseeching a playful note where all the world was many different strawberries. Forests and forests of difference and all setting the tone for much more to come. Perhaps on the same note there will be more of the same tones here, though with a verging more towards a yellowing of the full nature of events.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
And she never heard from him again

Why would he every contact her? He wouldn't. The end.

DredionDredionover 3 years ago
Really awesome story.

I would love to see how the relationship progresses.

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