All Comments on 'Ashley's Campaign Ch. 12'

Although I wish it had been Ashley's brother that took her virginity, the story is a really good read! Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep each chapter HOT like this.

Get back to the story base, drugs and niggers and fantasy drugs really.

A question about continuity. Emily is Ashley' s best friend and has been pole dancing since she started to like boys???? It just doesn't fit. When did they get a pole fir the work out room.

And I am really enjoying the story, except that dream sequence.

I know at the start, you said you started at the end and worked back, but this is a radically different story than the first several. I enjoyed how thing were progressing up until the nurse scene in Little Yellow Dress, and from there its gone wildly downhill. Magical drugs...brain dead *supposedly smart* lead char. 18 year old girls who are pro strippers...think im done with this story

Completely opposite to the previous comment, I very much enjoyed the nurse scene AND everything that came afterwards, now hoping that the next chapter comes soon_:D

I completely dig this series. It doesn't go where I expect at all, but it's kind of amazing for that, as it always leaves me wondering where it *is* going.

Let's face it—most erotica isn't extremely consistent and seems to ebb and flow wildly to it's author's whims. I appreciate that this takes it's time in laying down foreshadowing. I think the quality of the writing in this chapter (because it was so lengthy) wasn't quite as good as those leading up to it, but I'm tolerant of those pitfalls and still quite eager to see what's next.

One thing I will say, though... is please please don't let her get preggers.